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While I think this piece has a lot of potential, it needs some work. Way less telling, much mroe showing, please. Your sentence structure is jerky and abrupt. I couldn't ...

Hey Ash. What's really funny is that I started reading this and it wasn't until partway into it that I realized YOU'RE the author! (tee-hee) Anyway, I really enjoyed this. ...

So I've been working on this new story for a while. I haven't been on YWS or talked to you guys in what seems like forever, so I thought this ...

Thank you, Erica, for your reviews both on this and on my poem Escaping. It is much appreciated :)

Thanks, Stella :) I enjoyed reading your comments. And I'll post more probably sometime next week - I'm swamped with studying for the ACT's right now. It's written, but I'm ...

Ofir - You can find the next few chapters in my portfolio, titled Violet. Those chapters are the continuation of Sera's story. Ilthe's story I have yet to post. Thanks ...

Thanks for the input, you two :) It is very encouraging. Oh, and Moonlight, thanks for pointing out the whol baby-should-be-washed thing. That kind of escaped my notice when I ...

Okay, so those of you who have read Violet, this is actually going to be a part of that book. I've combined that with this, so now there are two ...

As I said to you before, Ash, I love this story. I hope you continue it, and it would be truly wonderful and amazing if you finished it. So get ...

Thanks for any/all reviews, everyone. I'd like to try and return the favor, so give me links to a story you want me to check out and I'll get to ...

I like Meyer, but yes, this was quite funny. Good job on the humor. I'm not going to bother with nitpicks or anything, because you said you weren't sure you ...

Hey everyone. I decided to post more of this, because honestly I'm not feeling too good about it. I want to know whether or not I'm wasting my time with ...

I love it :) Very good.

I like everything but the princess's hand/arm. It's funny-looking. But otherwise this is pretty neat - I like the colors and the shading. Keep drawing.

Hey Ash. I can see you've got a fanbase of your own, what are you talking about? :) So I have decided to bother you until you WRITE MORE. I ...