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Re: On a Day Like Today - 1.1
Thanks for the reviews, you guys. I really appreciate it. It's great that you took the time out of your days to read my work. Oh, and Music. About this ...
Jun 13, 2009 -
Re: On a Day Like Today - 1.1
Hi everyone. I've had this story in a folder for a while, and I just now decided to bring it back. I think I'm getting inspiration for it again. Yes, ...
Jun 11, 2009 -
Re: Because - Chap. 1 (Edited)
*EDITED* Again. Sigh.
Jun 10, 2009 -
Re: "Alone" Prologue
"Ugh!” Ryan slammed to the ground, blood around her lips [Describe more here. Where is the blood coming from? Is there a cut on her lip? The sentence is just ...
Jun 10, 2009 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 3
Thanks you guys. You're awesome :) Next chapter along shortly!
Jun 10, 2009 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 3
Chapter Three Goody’s was packed by the time we got there. Jensen had hardly said two words in the car; he just did his swallowing thing multiple times and pushed ...
Jun 9, 2009 -
Re: A Cold Moon [Chapter One] [Part I]
Hi, Dr. Pepper. I'm KJ. I noticed that you've gotten more than enough nitpicks, so I'll leave off on those this time. I wanted to give you a couple observations ...
Jun 9, 2009 -
Re: Book of Raziel - Prologue [Rewrote]
Hi, Tuna. The nitpicks have pretty much been covered, so I'll leave that department alone. I just wanted to give you a few tips that occured to me as I ...
Jun 9, 2009 -
Re: Prologue to Heartless
Hi, I'm KJ. I spotted no nitpicks to point out here - I was skimming, I'll admit. But I just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed this. You ...
Jun 9, 2009 -
Re: Chapter 1. Fire & Dark
Hi, I'm KJ. I don't have much to say about this first chapter, because honestly, I didn't finish. The narrative began well, actually. I liked the short Preface and your ...
Jun 9, 2009 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 1
Everyone, thanks so much for the comments and critiques. I really appreciate the time you've taken to read and review - it isn't watsed, I assure you! And to those ...
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 2
Thanks Asxz. I really appreciate the encouragment :)
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Sixteen
Hey Ash. I think I've already read this, but I just wanted to say I'm so glad you're getting inspiration again. Maybe it's the summer air - I've been writing ...
Jun 5, 2009 -
Re: The Experiment - Chap. 2
If you haven't read chapter one, you'll definitely need to go back and so do; you won't have any idea what's going on otherwise. Enjoy the read, and please be ...
Jun 5, 2009 -
Re: Rejection
Rejection is a sharp, merciless wound. An infection that festers and runs red with blood and tears. A place where there is no hope or light, just a soundless scream. ...
Jun 2, 2009
