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1. This should not be rated 12+ it should be rate 16+ if not 18+ 2. I really saw the meaning of this poem, I have the same stuff. Everyone ...

Wow, that was an interesting story. I hope you aren't treated like that. :O That would eb horrible that people actually would go though that. Also I really liked the ...

Pretty good, other than the minor cussing word, but the meaning was really good, maybe ezprss it better next ime 'cause I didn't really see it till abotu half way ...

I like the first stanza of the poem, but you kind of left me at the rest of it, I didn't really make teh conection. Also who is the girl, ...

Also I suggest if you get easily afraid of mythical creatures, I suggest you don't read this, but it isn't bad if you can watch scooby-doo you'll be fine. This ...

LOL, even though proper grammar is supposed to be on this site it was really good, i had soem trouble figuring out what all the txt lango meant but overall ...

I need help how to do it, thanks

I've wrote this once but it didn't turn out right.

Hi, this is a story I am currently writing. I am only on chapter 4 on paper though it is going to be a big story, maybe even a novella ...

THanks, but yeah I'm stil a young writer so I make a few mistakes every here and there. But I try my best, which is really what it is about ...

I really liked this, akwardly. But it was really good, I didn't really see the humor, but it was a good and a unigque poem. I've never hear anything like ...

I LOVE thi poem. I really expresses the heart and feelings. I am a christian too, so tha tis good! :D I feel the same way in parts of the ...

I can't find anythign wrong with it! I relaly like it, it ezpresses a lot of emotion which I like. I have trouble doign this but your, your a pro, ...

I really liked it! I is showing who you are and you aren't changing for someone, and/or you can't change for someone. Keep writing I really enjoyed that poem, I ...

Spoiler! : This is the begining of Leo's long journey of his life. This isn't all of it there are about five chapters explaining his childhood, as an adult. Thanks ...