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I also enjoyed this chapter. I do see his points though. True, it was rushed, and maybe could use some more detailing here and there on the characters, maybe even ...

This was a really good chapter. Except for the few typos and the rushed unclarity of some of her actions, I really enjoyed reading it. Like wisemann210 said, character development ...

I really enjoyed reading chapter one. You start describing the setting at one point, but then quickly stop and seem to focus in on the dialogue. But, so far, the ...

Hi! Welcome! I just joined too. I'm Kiy, Chickii, KB, or really anything else, lol. I used to write poems all the time, but I discovered stories are more my ...

ello! i'm kiley. peoples call me kiy or chickii... i don't really care either way.