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CHAPTER 4 OVER THE RIVER AND THROUGH THE WOODS “Come in, Charles! Come in!” A cheery and elderly woman’s voice called out as my father knocked on the door. I ...

This was really good. You really got the point through that there was some definite tension, and dislike, between Emily and her mother. Everyone already picked out the little things ...

Your writing style reminds me of a girl I help at school with her writing for language. Emotions and looks are detailed, the scenery is depicted, but there is a ...

Did someone say Twilight? *twitch 'cullen' twitch* lol jk I really liked your prologue. It flowed together really smoothly and captured my interest. It makes me wonder what she did ...

*honestly, i wasn't sure where to put this. i really wrote it on a whim. [s]so, it's not twilight related at all. though it does sound like edward. but it's ...

Wow, this was really good. Ignore the people saying it was cheesy. I know many girls say the exact same thing, trust me my friends do every single time. Can't ...

*it's after 11, and my nephews are a handful, so i'm really tired. & i'm really happy because team edward just beat team jacob! anyway, here's the next piece!* CHAPTER ...

This chapter was really enjoyable. Only a bit too hurried. I like Jonas already, he sort of reminds me of the tinman from the wizard of oz... anway, lol. I ...

This part made me laugh! I don't know why, I guess it was just how she's trying to get him to understand. Yeah, the Jack/Jackie thing got my attention too, ...

I really liked this part. The pace was really fast, maybe just down a few notches, but it really caught the state of her emotions. This part was really quick ...

yeah, sorry about the all caps. my keyboard was jammed and i didn't catch it. & i've been out at rehearsals so i couldn't change it. but i'm working on ...

*This song sounds better if a guy sings it, but girls can also sing it. Go Unisex Songs!! LOL But, really, I wrote it for my friend to sing, but ...

CHAPTER 2 AFTER THE DIAGNOSIS “Charlotte, grandma is sick.” My mother said looking at me. I set down my vampire novel and looked at her. “What is it this time?” ...

OMFG! This was so hysterical! I'm laughing so hard, I think I'm crying... scratch that: I AM crying! You are a genius! I love it when the stories are twisted ...

*This is my way of coping with my late grandmother's recent death. She loved her turquoise jewelery more than all the gold in her drawers. In a classic ' The ...