KAVOR17

* I would happily disscuss this if you PM me; and i will write Silvern back in soon i just dont have the time right now*

*Hope you can get in* Reyan stared at the gorman. He had recognized him right of the bat as a brother of the earth. Reyan didn't have the heart to ...

Karklen Karklen glared at the undead warlock. He was so arrogant... this Lucion thought he could kill Karklen. Little did it matter, Karklen could defend him self if that need ...

The Start: Evil Karklen was a menacing sight. He was 9 foot tall, had huge black wings, and burning red eyes. Even more were the small spikes that sprouted out ...

The Start Good Commander Silern stood on the edge of the forest. A slight wind shook the leaves, starting nature's song. Silern's Army hid among these leaves peering out at ...

do think that is enough characters to start?

Don't start storyline till I do, but please create characters. Thanks!

Welcome: You are in the world of Everity. Be an elf from the Kortac Forest or maybe a human from the plains of Veran. Even be a demon from the ...

The Elf put his hood up so only his glowing white eyes shone. He began to chant and his eyes flared. The Elf's hand rose shimmering with energy. "Averi!" He ...

*if im going to be in this story this is my character: Name: Reyan Age: 16 VERY YOUNG FOR AN ELF Race: Elf Gender: Male Education: Highly trained in Magic ...

*Can i join the story i've read the whole thing?*

I TOTALLY agree with Alex on this one Jake... You need to stop writing the Breakneck storys until you give them some thought or time... I dont say this to ...

Jake, i have read all of your Breakneck series and all of them are wrote as if you are in a big hurry. I think you should more time on ...

The boy was only about 13 years old but had made the torturous journey up the mountain. He stood on a sharp cliff at the very top of the icy ...

I rrrrrreeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaalllllllllyyyyyyy like this story the only thing i think you should edit is that you check your grammar and describe "The big green ship" in greater detail.