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Re: Birds
some pictures i drew of birds! not my best but here it is! birds001.jpg picture by KAH1010.jpeg
Jun 3, 2010 -
Re: Bloom and Die
This is amazing! I truly love this poem! I wouldn't change a thing. The way it rolled off my tongue when I read was just so pleasant. The emotion in ...
Jun 1, 2010 -
Re: Storm
ART002-1.jpg picture by KAH1010.jpeg
May 30, 2010 -
Re: Tree
ART 001.JPG
May 30, 2010 -
Re: LastPaladin Photos!
Hi LastPaladin, These are some great photos. I like how you incorporate the sun into each one. You can really tell that you thought hard about how the sun would ...
May 23, 2010 -
Re: Summer!
* a very quick poem I wrote about summer! Sorry if it's not my best! :wink: * Summer is sweet, You can be free. No more school, Only at the ...
May 23, 2010 -
Re: The Ravens call
I am absolutely in love with this poem, amazing! Only one spelling error I caught in this line "fraid by this borne hate" I think you meant born. But thats ...
May 22, 2010 -
Re: Hello World.!
Hello sizxskizz, Welcome to YWS! Although you are welcomed here, this sight is not for blogs. It is for writing. I know a blog is a type of writing, but ...
May 22, 2010 -
Re: Teach her to love
Hi angel23! The last line really, really is what made the poem astonishing for me! It is a really good poem in general. But the last line is amazing! I ...
May 22, 2010 -
Re: Not Much To lose (ch1)
*this is something new that I wrote late last night, tell me what you think!* The sky was crying, helplessly. While the wind scattered its creamy clouds, the melting of ...
May 22, 2010 -
Re: My Photography
Hey Gladius! I like these pictures! Especially the ones of the tree in the storm. And the "truck". You could match that picture with a story or something. Just a ...
May 21, 2010 -
Re: Running Away
*This is a poem I had to write for school in 6th grade. It was right after we read the book Crisping by: Avi. It was a good book.* Running, ...
May 21, 2010 -
Re: Anywhere But...
I love the book speak the movie is good to! I like this poem especially how you made scream get big to little. It's like she was screaming really load ...
May 20, 2010 -
Re: Always Think
You can always think, Things are going to be okay. You can always think, People will stay the same. You can always think, Nothing is going wrong. You can always ...
May 20, 2010 -
Re: My Beauty
I really like this poem. It is so true, everyone just tries to cover up the traits they where born with, even though they are beautiful. One small mistake i ...
May 20, 2010
