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Re: What Happens after life?
Hi! Ok for starter it was kind of boring. It is a great topic to write about because people think about death on a daily basis. But it needs something ...
Aug 7, 2010 -
Re: Everyone's Fool
Hi, this was a good poem! I think you should add some question marks though especially here: "Is it horrible, Is it disgusting, Is it a releif" Also you spelled ...
Aug 7, 2010 -
Re: Unknown Love- A Romantic Short Story.
Hello and welcome to YWS! I don't think this story is very realistic. I mean a teen court at a school? Two guys attacking the new girl? It just didn't ...
Aug 7, 2010 -
Re: Tribal DT
-Name: Tristan -Age: 16 -Gender: Male -Human/Spirit [If spirit, what kind]: Human -City: City Of The Sky -Personality: Tristan can be very aggressive and doesn’t mind hurting people unless he ...
Aug 7, 2010 -
Re: Roses Red
Hi! Ok, so at first I must admit I didn't like it. But after i re-read it and really registered the poem in my head I liked it a lot ...
Aug 7, 2010 -
Re: I'm Trying
I really liked this. It is a poem that a lot of people can relate to with their parents not trusting them even though they are mature enough to look ...
Aug 7, 2010 -
Re: Unraveling
Hello! I liked this! I like how you said "As every thread is of value, So is every moment of time. " Because every moment in time is important. Because ...
Aug 7, 2010 -
Re: Your Reflection In My Dreams
Stay away from me I need you to badly Let the sweet summer air sweep you away I suggested we grow up fast and not be the last But look ...
Aug 7, 2010 -
Re: Sunset Sailors
just a poem that came to me! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
Aug 5, 2010 -
Re: Flowers!
Sorry guys its bad because i had to re-size the photos so you cud see the whole thing without having to scroll and it makes it look like bad quality ...
Aug 5, 2010 -
Re: Flowers!
Pictures i took of some flowers! :D
Aug 5, 2010 -
Re: Spread Love Like Violence
haha yea :P
Jun 30, 2010 -
Re: For all teens
I liked this poem! The only thing i caught was you said "there" instead if "their" But other wise is was really good! I really like this line "Memories last ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: light up
i wanted to delete this but couldn't figure out how lalalalalala
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: Spread Love Like Violence
If I had my own world I’d fill it with wealth and desire Voices of united people I'd be the creator and love it for all that’s inside it Now ...
Jun 7, 2010
