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KAH

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: What Happens after life?

    Hi! Ok for starter it was kind of boring. It is a great topic to write about because people think about death on a daily basis. But it needs something ...

    Aug 7, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Everyone's Fool

    Hi, this was a good poem! I think you should add some question marks though especially here: "Is it horrible, Is it disgusting, Is it a releif" Also you spelled ...

    Aug 7, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Unknown Love- A Romantic Short Story.

    Hello and welcome to YWS! I don't think this story is very realistic. I mean a teen court at a school? Two guys attacking the new girl? It just didn't ...

    Aug 7, 2010
  • OOC Archive Re: Tribal DT

    -Name: Tristan -Age: 16 -Gender: Male -Human/Spirit [If spirit, what kind]: Human -City: City Of The Sky -Personality: Tristan can be very aggressive and doesn’t mind hurting people unless he ...

    Aug 7, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Roses Red

    Hi! Ok, so at first I must admit I didn't like it. But after i re-read it and really registered the poem in my head I liked it a lot ...

    Aug 7, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: I'm Trying

    I really liked this. It is a poem that a lot of people can relate to with their parents not trusting them even though they are mature enough to look ...

    Aug 7, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Unraveling

    Hello! I liked this! I like how you said "As every thread is of value, So is every moment of time. " Because every moment in time is important. Because ...

    Aug 7, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Your Reflection In My Dreams

    Stay away from me I need you to badly Let the sweet summer air sweep you away I suggested we grow up fast and not be the last But look ...

    Aug 7, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Sunset Sailors

    just a poem that came to me! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

    Aug 5, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Flowers!

    Sorry guys its bad because i had to re-size the photos so you cud see the whole thing without having to scroll and it makes it look like bad quality ...

    Aug 5, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Flowers!

    Pictures i took of some flowers! :D

    Aug 5, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Spread Love Like Violence

    haha yea :P

    Jun 30, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: For all teens

    I liked this poem! The only thing i caught was you said "there" instead if "their" But other wise is was really good! I really like this line "Memories last ...

    Jun 18, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: light up

    i wanted to delete this but couldn't figure out how lalalalalala

    Jun 18, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Spread Love Like Violence

    If I had my own world I’d fill it with wealth and desire Voices of united people I'd be the creator and love it for all that’s inside it Now ...

    Jun 7, 2010


Maybe I should say something quote-worthy, like, I dunno... "You can only be happy if you decide to be happy?"
— Necromancer14