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This was a really good story!! :mrgreen: I think you should add more detail on how she feels, does he want to run down and stop the fighting? Can she? ...

8228_1205708073118_1541149976_30552120_884889_n.jpg.jpeg A sketch of a girl i made. She was in my imagination not a real person. I hope you like it! :)

I'm not sure exactly what it is everyone has their own imagination and thought on what it could be!!! Sorry you can't see it very well better then before! :mrgreen:

I sit on my front stoop Listening to the sounds Of the night Alone outside with all my frights Just me and who I could be Locked out of the ...

Thank you for all of your help, I have fixed all of the mistakes you spotted! This is one of my abandoned stories so you only get to see the ...

Thanks!! I will get right on and edit this! You have very good advice and I will work to fix my story. It is the first one i have ever ...

This was really really good Isha!!! I love the title I can never think of good titles! So sad but it makes it better that Mark died. I'm not a ...

I read the first part and I really liked it, and this part had a lot of suspense. I liked it a lot! You could really expand this whole story ...

I love Greek mythology, and i am so glad someone is writing about it! You are very good at writing, i can't wait for more! :mrgreen:

This started out as a 3 page paper for my L.A class, but I decided to continue...... there are more chapters to come. I was running so fast you couldn’t ...

Thanks!!I am finding my way around pretty well. I will taker your advice and move my story into a more fitting category!! :D I'm glad you liked it and i ...

This is really good and has a lot of detail. This may sound weird but, I love the way you explain her eyes.

THIS IS AMAZING!!! i love the beginning!! keep writing! :mrgreen:

I wrote this awhile ago and decided to post it. I was going to make it into a longer story, but i didn't know how to get it started. So ...