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Driving down the road Forever Can't wait until I get somewhere Yellow lines on gray gravel Is all I ever see Just me and me In the rusty old machine ...

I don't understand the poem very well! But it was good at the same time! It doesn't teally mean anything to me, but some how I still adore this poem! ...

I like this poem it is really easy to relate to! I like this line "You, that feasts on rotting prey." It sounds like the master is an animal! Good ...

Hi, This was really good! I like how you explained the narrater doing suicide without stating it. You said I was flying instead which is great, I like implied actions/ideas. ...

I really like this poem. The only thing I would change is how the second stanza doesn't rhyme. It is hard to rhyme things with gravity, if you can't think ...

Why is it called idek? I watch this guy on youtube called idek but I don't think that has anything to do with this poem. It was good I like ...

This picture is much to big for anyone to see! If you want some tips on how to re-size your photo go to Elinor Brynnes (hope i spelled name right!)guide ...

Wow! This is really good! Doesn't derriere mean behind in french? I love how you can really see all the texture! Especially in the skirt and hair! The shading on ...

*this is my other story The Runner in short story form. I am not going on with the chapter book one so i shortened it and re-named it as what ...

You have very good description! I don't understand what you mean when you say: But it's not just the moon, James, it's you. Also why did you change from James ...

It was really short for a first section. You need to make it much longer at least four more paragraphs so readers can get an idea of weather they want ...

The one thing in life that I have learned is never talk about how bad your life is because someone's is always worse then yours. But these are the times ...

This was really good I really liked it! I have theories about what James could be. I think he is some kind of super human so to speak. Like he ...

I was looking over my brother's shoulders while he was reading a comic, and mixed some of what I saw and some things from my imagination into this picture! Hope ...

This was a good story but there where a couple error I caught. "I'm tired of this game your playin', I'm tired of this friends with benefits. "Your messin' with ...