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Hi,scremaandshout I like this poem. Especially the first stanza. I think we all wish to be something we aren't even if we could do it for a day. This poem ...

This is a pretty good start. Some mistakes i caught; "an Drake was heading down to the beach" I think you meant and instead of an. "along Gulf boulevard" If ...

You can run away, From what means most to you And you can run away, From the place that feels most like home to you You can run away, From ...

Haha, this is good and funny! I really like the chorus! I even played the song and sung along to your lyrics! Haha! We had to make a song about ...

This is really good so far!I like how you describe her hair as "Her soft strawberry locks." It sound better then red hair. I agree that you could make it ...

This poem made me sad. Especially at the end when it says "because you ran away to the cloud filled heavens." I like how you didn't say because you died ...

I like how you connect what the narrater is feeling to a storm. It is a good way to explain what the person is feeling. I say this to a ...

I like the name Admira! Kind of a weird beginning but once you explained her thoughts it made more sense! It doesn't seem like those people are really her friends. ...

My head hurts My chest throbs My legs wobble My breath quickens My eyes tear My mouth waters My heart flutters For something I can't have You

I really like this whole stanza and the whole poem "But when your gone the nightmare begins it's course I feel cold inside when your arms aren't there to keep ...

This poem is odd. First of all the whole which things is confusing. Second first the witch likes him and then she hates him. The feeling are too mixed. It ...

I like this! The line that i really like is "Your far-way dreamboat pulls into the dock" I like how you described her emotions here! I also liked "-a knock ...

Woah! That is really good! I love the colors that she used! It makes it pop without hurting your eyes! Personally I hate birds but this made me like them ...

If you already posted this whole thing or this whole story then why do you keep putting up these little sections? I read the full one and it was REALLY ...

This poem really confused me! I didn't really understand it! But I like the repetition of one two three four. I don't understand why you put half of the word ...