Jyva

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"Fire at will!" "Don't," Will said.

if you're good enough to see what's wrong with those awful books, then... you're not really learning anything from them, are you? you already know what's wrong. they're more of ...

Hi :) I really need someone to review my series. There's two chapters so far so it shouldn't take too long... There's the link to the first one, the second ...

My writing is in need of some brutal honesty! It would really help if you could review this first chapter. you've saved it as a draft, i can't see it.

My writing could use some brutal honesty, it helps me very much. Here's a link if you'd be willing to review. done

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Hi, Felistia here. :D I would really like you to review my novel please. It's a fantasy, action\adventure novel. It is a slight fanfic to the Wings of Fire series, ...

Hello Jyva!! I would appreciate any reviews of my poems. I think I can take some quite harsh criticism. This is I think the best of the crop so I'd ...

So, I'd love to have a simple, thorough, honest review. I've had a couple reviewers do my work, but some of them I feel are filled with a bit too ...

So, I'd love to have a simple, thorough, honest review. I've had a couple reviewers do my work, but some of them I feel are filled with a bit too ...

>Quality > Quantity Always remember, it's better to write one good review than to write 4 quick reviews. Not only will you earn more points, but you'll be more helpful ...

@Jyva review done :) It's a great piece of writing. -AnarchyWolf ah i forgot to say thanks here

heres a chance for revenge i feel that I'm not writing fight scenes well enough. since one's about to come up, heres this for you to review so i can ...