Justlittleoleme2

Sounds great! Unfurled pairs with the main character's name, Lily. Makes me think of petals unfurling from a flower bud. ---- Udairnil was a forest by the South Sea.

Louis: "Geoff, do you remember were I left that old paint set?" *starts to tear the house apart looking for them. Finds several pairs of misplaced reading glasses, the old ...

Louis: meditate on the brief existence of human life, and ponder his own mortality for the rest of that week. Geoffery: Reminded how short human life his compared to his ...

@youngcamus Your sentences and descriptions are strong. I can see the picture you are painting well, but I'm feeling a bit confused by what I'm "seeing".. Blinding spotlights and deafening ...

Title: Frost and Flame Genre: adventure/fantasy No beast walked the icy fields of the countryside that morning, neither did the birds give voice to their customary morning praise. Even the ...

Thank you ^.^

How do you know if a story is worth telling? What makes it worth telling? and What makes a good story a good story?

Melody :P

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