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Re: Rate the first sentence above you
Sounds great! Unfurled pairs with the main character's name, Lily. Makes me think of petals unfurling from a flower bud. ---- Udairnil was a forest by the South Sea.
Jul 8, 2018 -
Re: What would your characters do?
Louis: "Geoff, do you remember were I left that old paint set?" *starts to tear the house apart looking for them. Finds several pairs of misplaced reading glasses, the old ...
Jul 7, 2018 -
Re: What would your characters do?
Louis: meditate on the brief existence of human life, and ponder his own mortality for the rest of that week. Geoffery: Reminded how short human life his compared to his ...
Jul 6, 2018 -
Re: Critique game - first three sentences of your novel/story
@youngcamus Your sentences and descriptions are strong. I can see the picture you are painting well, but I'm feeling a bit confused by what I'm "seeing".. Blinding spotlights and deafening ...
Jul 6, 2018 -
Re: Critique game - first three sentences of your novel/story
Title: Frost and Flame Genre: adventure/fantasy No beast walked the icy fields of the countryside that morning, neither did the birds give voice to their customary morning praise. Even the ...
Jun 25, 2018 -
Re: Why did you join YWS?
I joined this site about the same time my family got sick of me begging them to read my stories. So, I guess I joined the site so I could ...
Jun 23, 2018 -
Re: How Did You Come Up With Your Username?
I'm just little old me. I came up with it because I was too lazy think of something creative. xD Then, I had to make a new account because I ...
Feb 1, 2018 -
Re: What Inspires You to Write?
I'm not really sure what "inspires me" exactly. I usually just wake up with an itch to write, or I'll come across a story idea while cleaning or reading. Then ...
Jan 25, 2018 -
Re: Farm ownership questions!(Are horse stories still loved?)
Hey there. ^-^ So, I was sitting around trying to decide what to write. I remembered that horse stories were my favorite when I was a kid, and so I ...
Jan 11, 2018 -
Re: The 'grim is coming for you.
Hey Megrim, I'd love it if you would take a look a my Novel: A Gryphon's Tail. It's Adventure/Fantasy, and one of the first novels I've ever gotten past chapter ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: Story Starters Contest
...Yes. :P ...Please :D
Sep 12, 2017 -
Re: Poetry writing contest
Here is my entry: We love trees so much: We make our houses out of them, and eat their fruit, and breath their air, and write stories upon their flesh. ...
Sep 12, 2017 -
Re: Story Starters Contest
Can I jump in late? Please ^-^
Sep 12, 2017 -
Re: Pros and cons of writing as storytelling medium?
I think the really great thing about writing is that you get to be in the character's "head". You get to experience the flow of their thoughts, their reasoning, and ...
Mar 20, 2017 -
Re: The Rift
^-^ Cool.
Jan 18, 2017
