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  • Lyric Poetry Re: A New Morning After Another Night...

    I step out, barefoot, into the cold morning grass, relieved to have made it through, another night. The pale air strikes my senses, and I let it fill me, like ...

    Sep 13, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Fallen, The Brave

    I can say honestly that I liked this poem a lot, the meaning of it is very honest and true, It even made me tear up a bit...

    Sep 12, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Watched(expanded)

    XD Thanks sooo much guys! I'm glad you liked it...I will eventually finish, I'm just kinda stuck on how the next scene should go...sort of a writers block kinda deal, ...

    Sep 12, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: The before and after of slapping someone with a wet fish.

    Okay, I just have to say, I really like this poem. It was very fun to read and made me smile, especially that last part! I also liked the title, ...

    Sep 7, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Watched(expanded)

    A little adventure story I cooked up in the spur of the moment...this is more of a rough draft and its not quite finished but I figured I might as ...

    Sep 4, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Photo Manipulation

    XD I like the first one a lot, its almost perfect, very beautiful and wild looking, I love the color in it especially...but I agree with you on the second ...

    Sep 1, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Hurricanes are Beautiful

    It was beautifully written! Why is it that 3 in the morning writing(or drawing) is always the best...the few nitpicks have already been pointed out so I will just give ...

    Aug 30, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: An Adventure In A Cave

    This was a pretty decent story for you first entry ;) . There were some parts that I really liked(like the riddles and such :3 ) and I can tell ...

    Aug 22, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Grace

    I really liked this poem! It was actually very deep and well structured, without even having to be a whole page long. I also felt the message was a very ...

    Aug 22, 2011
  • Fiction Discussion Re: The Most Disturbing Book...

    Lockdown: escape from furnace by Alexander Gordon Smith. I found this book to be the most disturbing(and exciting) books I've ever read. I found my self wanting the characters to ...

    Aug 20, 2011
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Top 5 best books you've ever read.

    Can I do more than 5? XD 1. The Taggerung- by Brian Jaques. This book was my favorite among the whole Redwall series. 2. The Jungle book- by Rudyard Kipling(I ...

    Aug 20, 2011
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Top 5 Worst Books You Ever Read

    Well, I can't say that I've ever actually finished a book I didn't like...If I start getting bored or if I see something I don't like I simply put it ...

    Aug 20, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: The Ice Queen(re-vised and re-written)

    Thanks Charcoalspacewolfman XD I'm glad to here that it was an improvement! My confidence has been successfully restored! To be truthful, I actually enjoyed writing this version. I spent much ...

    Aug 19, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Chasing Rainbows ~

    I really like the imagery of this piece, especially the part about running your finger's through a river of indigo, etc. I found it very enjoyable to read...though I did ...

    Aug 19, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: 317 (1)

    First, I have to say I really did like this a lot! I felt like I was reading a book...well at least after I got into it. Sure there were ...

    Aug 19, 2011


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