Justagirl

The Wanderer I wandered aimlessly, Always looking, Never stopping. When will I stop? I asked myself. I didn't know. What am I looking for? I asked myself. This I did ...

I think I'm starting to be a poet, and this is the start of my line of poetry. Please be honest and tell me what you think, but too harsh ...

epicdoctorwhofan

Well, seems there isn't going to be a very long yearbook. Oh well. I joined YWS a while ago and then my account was shut down :'(. I got up ...

Uh.. 2/10, I haven't heard any of those songs although I love Aerosmith. I have old and new songs on my MP3 player. Don't make fun of the REALLY old ...

This is a really cool piece, you HAVE to write more :)! Not particularly about time or anything, this piece is perfect length the way it is. But write other ...

Hey there! Here's a photo of a sunset I took last week at around 5:30 PM. I would appreciate if you give your comment or opinion about it! Have a ...

This is a cool poem. I don't really have any nitpicks. By the way - welcome to YWS!! Keep writing! Alzora

This is based off a Green Day song and I'm also writing a novel based off the song so that's why it's called Boulevard of Broken Dreams Boulevard of Broken ...

This is for Trident's Three-Pronged Contest. My things to incorporate are a) a lawn gnome, b) duct-taping an article of clothing, and c) a silver penny. Critique as harsh as ...

NOTE: I had to write this for APLangComp and the ending was rushed because I ran out of time. It ended up being icky and not the way I wanted ...

Lost Walking down a road, People watching me. Wishing for my abode, Needing to think clearly. How did I get here? My mother once said, “You’ll find your place my ...

Hi there!! I've never edited a poem before but I love to write them so I thought I'd give it a try on your poem. Here I go! T he ...

Before I go to work I want to tell you that everbody's works that are on here are WONDERFUL!! You are not an exeption. Don't worry. Now - on to ...

-deleted- I had to fix my novel and I couldn't do it without deleting this piece :( I'm putting it back up though!!!