Justagirl

Why is “I love you” so hard to say? That's a good question... When three simple words Could change or save a life, It could stop all hate, And put ...

He will be drawn no mercy out of him, This line's wording confuses me. Singing like a demon of satanic hymn. I like this line, it's nicely sinister :twisted: He ...

Interesting poem. It doesn't really grab me though. I don't really understand it - it's a little confusing, is it from the horse's point of view the whole time? Also ...

Thanks for editing!! I revised my poem, is it better now?

I'd like the memory of me to be a happy one . I'd like to leave an afterglow of smiles when life is done . I'd like to leave an ...

The Ocean Our boat crashes up and down, A pawn being beaten by a king. The waves surge over the bow, Everything is soaked. I feel the wind and sea, ...

Beautiful, your face I find. Here, stuck in my mind. Making my heart twist and bind. See... inside your name is signed. This line is a little weird, it doesn't ...

Gah!! I don't really like the way you keep using "dark and deadly" it get boring... quickly. The rest of the poem is ok. Keep writing, Alzora

It's ok. I don't like the color orange so that's what's turning me off of it. Alzora

Masquerade of the Darkest Folk Elizabeth is a vampyre. She kills people ruthlessly and gets into trouble with the vampyre government. But when she goes to the 473 annual vampyre ...

Erica. Sorry that the name is plain but after reading your description it popped in my head. *Shrugs* My character is not a main character, she's one of the helpers ...

6/10 it's ok. Is almost an attention grabber, but just a little to weak. Here's mine: I shoved my hands against the door, watching the long nails scratch my wrist, ...

When your world is crashing around you, Someone you think may never accept you, Gives you the hope you have been longing for , For when you think of the ...

Writer's Block Chewing on my eraser, Waiting. Hoping for an idea to form, Wishing. Brainstorming useless words, Waiting. Wanting a sentence to come, Wishing. My mind a useless wasteland, Waiting. ...

I'm more of a story teller kind of person, rather than a poet, but I had a few poems taking space on my computer desktop. I thought I might throw ...