Justagirl

Suicide I look at the small child before me, diagnosed with cancer, dead before his time had come. He looks up at me, “What happened?” “You died,” I answer calmly. ...

Mia sat beside me blabbering away about some science test she was sure she’d fail , which I was sure she wouldn't as she practically lived and breathed science. I ...

I like these ones a ton!! This was for my sister. I eventually switched the saying around so it would read Live for today, Dream for tomorrow. Easy to switch ...

Wow, this is awesome. I'd love to read the rest of it!! *Sighs* To bad you haven't finished it yet... Keep writing! Alzora

First of all I love your siggie, it's so true :) Head bent, winding what's winding for? a mix of tears and leaves. Tumbling softly to a dusty earth. Swept ...

My Dog and Me I watch my dog from my porch, She stalks slowly through the grass. She stops and watches as I walk from porch. She changes direction and ...

So polite so strong, It should be "So polite, So strong." Fore I shall grant it For, not Fore. The end of this poem was surprising. It was wonderful!! I ...

This is an ok poem. I feel it doesn't have much emotion... I like emotion, a lot. Also this line is a bit awkward: More, More, More! It doesn't seem ...

This is so cool, I like how it subtly rhymes. It's got nice descriptions too. Be proud :) Keep writing, Alzora

Wow, I haven't been on here in a while.....but I need to know what you think about this piece....have at it! My body lies under the dirt , a corpse, ...

My Garden I wander through this endless garden. Giant, jolly, fuzzy bumble bees buzz by me. Flowers flop happily as I push past them. Sweet fragrance fills the air. I ...

I lie in wait for something grand , a feeling greater than this sensation , p ulsing through my veins . My body trembles at your fingers touch . Flesh ...

Fluffy I pick up the teddy bear. Its fur is soft, Fluffy, Long. I run my hands through it, Loving the cool feel. I whisper to the bear, "Fluffy."

Still waiting. Um... When is "it" going to come around? *waits some more*

Waiting.