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This is a great poem!! I do think it needs more emotion though. The repetitiveness actually gives it personality, it's very nice :) Keep writing, Alzora

Great poem! I see nothing wrong with it... Good job, it's got great emotion! Keep writing, Alzora

Aaaaaaw!!! It's so cuuute!! I love it :D Keep drawing (you're really good!), Alzora

Hi there, I particularly like the Guns and Roses one - I like that band - I think it's well portrayed. You definetly drew everything better than I could. Nice ...

I think that this photo would have been brilliant had you just focused on the tall white plants that seem to be in the middle of the picture. Keep photographing! ...

Great poem!! I don't see any improvement that it needs, yay! Keep writing, Alzora

A ring rose from sleepers who lurked in the lobes of the storehouse of starches -- like hungry hobos . T hey hitched a ride on a one-way train of ...

Torin “Torin,” called Nezra’s voice, “There’s some desperate girl at the door!” “Ok, I’m coming…” I wondered who this “desperate girl” was, another girl looking for the library

Where the desert rolls into the ocean a nd the midnight sun burns the back, w hen the bombs shriek by, their exhaust burning the air in hot song , ...

I was sitting next to my little sister, Penny, who had always found my sneezes hysterical; they were high-pitched and squeaky . A huge contrast from my voice which had ...

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Interesting poem. I believe, though, towards the middle it stops flowing smoothly. Keep writing, Alzora

I think it was very dramatic in the middle and less dramatic at each end. Good job though, this poem is wonderful :) Keep writing! Alzora

Awesome poem!! I love it. It almost reminds me of a book series that I love. You did really well!! Keep writing! Alzora

I love this line: But I miss you. It's definitely my favorite. This poem is very good. I like it a lot. Your very good at writing poems!! Keep writing! ...