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Ok, this is a good poem, but not as good as others that I've read by you. (My heart is freezing still) What is with the parentheses here??? Keep writing, ...

Wow, hey this is a cool peom. It's nice and deep and I didn't see anything wrong with it. Wonderfully, beautifully written!! Love it! Keep writing, Alzora

To My Best Friend : a nd now , the answer I want you to see. It ' s like living in a world without sunshine, ‘C c ause you ...

Oooh!! That's soooo cool Mar!!! You're brilliant. Let me say that again, you're brilliant!! Keep photo shopping, Alzora P.S. did you get the wings on me, Sar-Sar, and Kes-Kes yet?

This is awesome!! How'd you do it? drawing, painting, computer program?? It's so cool! Keep... artifying, Alzora

Have - have I read this before??? It seems... Familiar... I think I have and when I did I liked it a lot. Hm... Yes. It was great - and ...

Lets say first that: I LOVE TO SKI!!! Alright, now on with the review. This was really well written, I loved reading it and enjoyed it a lot. I don't ...

I walk along an empty street , s hadows pass me by . Their souls my worries, fears , and doubts . Images brought to life . Love this stanza ...

Alora “Alora, come on.” “Here I come!” Nezra stared daggers at me while I hurried to catch up with Torin who was already at the door. “So Nezra, you stay ...

HAHAHAHAHA *3 minutes later is still laughing* Love this poem!!! I soo understand it. Keep writing, Alzora

Very interesting Sar-Sar, not one of your best but still nice. Good job :D Keep writing, Alzora

This could have more a pop! at the ending... Something like: " So please, never give up. " Or: " So please, keep fighting and never give up. " I ...

Well, sorry to be such a downer, but... This wasn't really good in my eyes. The writing style was kind of boring... It also didn't help me with being more ...

Humanity Battles raging on, people dying for no reason. Evil people springing forth, to murder, kidnap, or steal. This is Humanity. Friends being found, love being made, eternal bonds forming. ...

I laughed the whole time I was reading this. I can't even stop now... Oh gosh, running out of air. Keep writing!! Alzora