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Re: Beauty
She has eyes never seen before , d eep navy blue that everyone will adore . Her pale light skin ever so smooth and soft , it c an attract ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Heroes Never Die, They Just Get Lost Sometimes
So instead she swayed lightly , her feet just grazing the ground. After around five minutes she decided she wanted to meet the little boy, lightly she jumped off the ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Children of the Sea
The sea. Where all his troubles Have no choice But to flee. This is my favorite part. Very nice poem!! Well written with great description. The only thing that could ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: My Crush Ate My Homework
Ha ha ha, I love this poem. You say this really happened??? Love it. Really well written and wonderfully funny. Great job! Keep writing, Alzora
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Not a home
but it is clear they still love each other. This should be: but it is clear they still love each other Whoa, I love the end of this poem: Are ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Tree and Vines
Whoa!! I love the edited version. It's so beautiful!! I'm not the best photographer but I love to edit pictures and I think you did a really great job. Keep ...
Jan 28, 2011 -
Re: (Dreams) Chapter 5
Thanks so much Sar-Sar :D!! I don't know how to do a character questionnaire, could you help me with that?? Thanks, Alzora
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: Photos! (Project 365 - day 4-11)
*Kisses then waves fingers at photos* Wonderful!! These are such cool, cool pictures!! I love them! Keep photographing, Alzora
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: Thug
This is pretty well done... I don't like it but Will has talent. Just a matter of personal preference is why I don't like it. Otherwise it's very good, nice ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: Dear Mr. President
What a wonderful piece!! I really like it and the picture at the end made quite a statement! ^.^ I didn't see any problems with it at all, it was ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: (Dreams) Chapter 5
Alora “Oh my god Nezra you are in so much trouble.” Said Torin, every word heavy with anger. We had finally gotten away from the dark figure and were now ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: Born a Peach, Die a Hero
*Laughs for 5 hours straight* *gasps* Wow... *wipes tears from eyes* That was SO FUNNY!!!! I love it!!! Keep writing, Alzora
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: My brain is pouring out of my ears right now!!!
I know the cure. I too used to have this disease. I wrote 2 sort-of-novels before I found out what the disease was. Then, I stopped writing. I thought about ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: W.R.I.T.E.R.S (Prologue)
Oh my god. How did you know!?!? I didn't know all of us WRITERS knew?? So glad to find another member!!!! Yes!! This piece was extremely well written - you ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Insomnia
Oh! Hey!! I like this, this is cool! I really like this short story of yours it was well written, the only problem I had with it is that the ...
Jan 17, 2011
