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Emotion Wave Anger. Flaring up to engulf me. I’m falling, drowning in it, watching myself yell words I don’t want to. I can’t help it – it’s a human thing! ...

Heya!! Wonderful poem!! I've actually written something longer that's almost like this... ;) The only thing that this needs is punctuation !!! There is no punctuation *tsks*, go through it ...

I really love the first picture!! It's so well drawn!!! The people's emotions are wonderful - this piece really would take a thousand words to be described... ;) Keep drawing, ...

Well, they're ok. They're very colorless and not much catches your eye.... My favorite is the second one. You did a nice job finding that and then photographing it. The ...

This is an okay chapter. I think you do way to much telling in this chapter - it's sort of an overload for my brain, try to put it in ...

Well, this is another ok chapter... I think you do a bit to much telling and this chapter is mostly dialogue. Although, it's a short chapter so I guess the ...

Hi there!! If you made this a poem it would be AWESOME - I think. If you wrote this because you actually did want attention then PM me!! Let's get ...

It's raining again. I love this line :D l eaving tiny tracks of water l ike a line of weary ants, traveling far away. I wonder where you are , ...

Wow, wonderful emotion. I loved this poem - I think it was really great. Awesome job!! Keep writing, Alzora

In The Cave Inside the cave, is a creature you fear. The image is with you now freezing you in horror. You start to realize what this animal truly is. ...

Nice job Sar-Sar. I'm so sorry but I must... Give you my whole opinion. It needs more emotion. I know it would be hard but pretty much the only emotion ...

I needed to stay alert in these types of places. Alcohol helps you relax , not stay awake. I ignored him, but I stole a glance back at him. Um... ...

Whoa, this is so nice, so touching! I love it!! Very well done, I hope I can write lyrics like you someday... I also love the name very much... Ice ...

The car revs his engine, and speeds faster down the ghost highway. It would be smoother if this went " The 's engine is revved as it speeds faster down ...

Aaaw!! This is such a sweet poem!! I love it. Very nice ending.... :D Keep writing, Alzora