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Fortunately all the people were killed by the aliens so there are none left to eat the poisoned broccoli-cheese soup!

What are you and I made of?

Loved the second and last ones. The second had so many shades of blue and that made it beautiful. The last was just a nice scenery pic. Good job ;) ...

Heyyy, this is awesome! I have no nitpicks with it because I whizzed through it - excited to see where it ended up! I loved it! Keep writing, Alzora

I wonder if you’ll read this, I wonder if you care. I like these lines :) Soon, I’ll have grey hair. This is a kind of weird way to say, ...

This is actually a bit of a spin off my own love life. Just a bit of fiction added to mix it up... I'd love comments but don't be too ...

This is a poem that I don't really like. Give me your opinion but don't crush it, ok? Thanks :wink: Bone Queen Her frail, white body glides across the snow ...

I don't usually write fan-fictions (I've never written one before), but I loved this novel a LOT. So then, naturally, ideas started to bounce around in my head and I ...

This is really great but it seems like you spent way more time on her waist up then her legs and feet. Try to make them more detailed because it ...

Why can’t you just let yourself go? F orget about the past The first problem I had with it^ The other thing is that the ending isn't very final. Think ...

Pelt

Interesting... 7/10 -Alzora

Unfortunately they all die again because they're attacked by aliens.

Hm... 7/10. It's funny but I have no idea where it's from... XD -Alzora