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:shock: Yes, of course she is! N - Neon Trees!

The dumb questions are dumb - aren't they?

Tall, short black hair, blue eyes, smiles a lot. :D -Alzora

9/10 yum. -Alzora

Kill (Heheheheh :twisted: )

6/10 Don't know any of those songs but I know some of the bands... 1. I See You - Mika 2. Penny Lane - The Beatles 3. We Are Golden ...

A strong wind blows back my longish hair from my face. Oh noes! You used the horrible word 'longish'! But, no worries, you can fix it. ;) The y say ...

"Soot, you take the forest , t hat's what you're used to." After a (I took out the word 'little' that was here) while of un successful hunting, Soot heard ...

"Why did you call me here?" She called out. Smallbreeze froze, her hackles standing on end with the chill of his voice. Do hackles really 'stand on end'?? Very, very ...

He made his mess, the trees seize to nest The lonely, peaceful dove. This doesn't quite make sense... Ok, this is a really cool poem but it has a couple ...

Thanks so much for all the great comments and reviews you guys! It really means a lot to me :D -Alzora

-Don't ever fall in love with someone who is more than one thousand miles away from you. I t usually doesn't work. -If it hurts, d on't do it again! ...

Interesting poem. I can feel the emotion in it but the flow is interrupted in so many places. Try and find any place that has a word that could be ...

Wow. This is a very interesting piece. I think it's one of the fullest short stories that I've read on here. So, congrats to that. This is actually a really ...

Aaaw, this is sweet. To make it even better you could: Fix all grammatical, spelling, and capitalization errors and Put in some imagery. That's all though! Otherwise, good job. I ...