Justagirl

I loved this. It made me smile and I felt it and it was awesome. My only nitpick is.... Every fear you have will be disproven - if that's the ...

This is awesome. You have such great imagery in here I can totally imagine being right there and watching everything you describe. Plus you have really great emotion and flow. ...

This is really great. Although you weren't aiming for understanding also I understood it perfectly. And it was wonderful. Your emotion and imagery was really great and if all your ...

Uh, wow. This poem is really good. You have so much emotion packed in it it's like it's vibrating :) The only thing it kind of lacks is flow. If ...

This is really odd. And funny/cool. :) Here are the things that are kind of odd: A cat ate a purple lily (You probably could just say, 'A cat ate ...

This is really great. I like a lot of your poems but this one isn't the same as the rest. It doesn't flow quite so well because there are only ...

This is an interesting poem. I don't really understand what it's supposed to be about and you definitely need more punctuation and some help with your flow. Other than that ...

This is very interesting... You definitely need to add some more punctuation and capitalization. Also, what are those words in parentheses for? What are they all about? They made almost ...

In the letter to 'Bald Asshole': That was pretty rude of us, and for it you r probably worried for the future generations. In the non-letter paragraphs: No one was ...

Aaaaw, this is so sweet! You have a really good piece here. I didn't see any grammatical mistakes and you tell the story well ;) But there are a couple ...

Tears submerged Lois’ eyes when he woke up that morning. This is the time. H e thought. Memories filled his mind; of friends, family, and identity. Now he had to ...

And ignore the " Please forgive me. " Wow, great poem. Luckily, I saw only one grammatical mistake (*phew*), so, good job on that :) You had great emotion in ...

This is a really great poem. Your imagery is really great and you have a great rhyme scheme (I can't ryhme for my life so, congrats on being able to). ...

This is a pretty good poem :) You have ok flow in it and the emotion is really great. You could use some imagery but you don't really need to. ...

Awesome poem. Although what Ignatius said is true I still like it a lot. There was great emotion and the flow was wonderful. I think the only thing you could ...