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Re: Poverty
Hey guys, Thanks for the reviews so far. You've been great ;) Just found out I had to include a couple more things in this poem so there are some ...
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: I Wish I Were a Stone
Aaaawesome! This emotion is really great and this poem is so clear . The only thing wrong with it is it's flow, which stops being weird at this stanza on: ...
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: Poverty
I had to write this for my LA class and the picture gives me 10 more points (as long as it relates to my poem - which it does). poverty ...
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: The Spider's Secret and A Lady On A Leaf
Great shots! I remember seeing the first one somewhere before... Was that your poem - Spider's Secret? Anyways, this is a really good picture for it, great job picking. ;) ...
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: YWLJ Cover Submissions
I love the first one a lot. Both are really great but the first is the better one ;) How did you make them? They're really cool. Great ideas by ...
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: A Rose for You, My Darling
Oooh! This is so cute! He is a photogenic little boy. How lucky are you?! My dog wouldn't stand still for her life... XD Anyways, This is a great picture ...
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: More manga!
Sorry, but I think I have to say that I liked the boy better. The girl seems like you worked too much on her... Her problems are: Like the boy, ...
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: Anime/Manga Drawing
Wow, this is your first try? You're amazing ! He's really good for a first time. But a couple of things to work on... Try not to make hair hair ...
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: Run Away
Great poem. I can feel the emotion and it all flows pretty well ;) The only thing is... Look , I did it M a That's the only problem that ...
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: Not Free
Loved this. It's got great flow and the emotion is pretty good. The only line that interrupts the flow is: Who am I kidding It doesn't seem to go with ...
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: Characters in my next novel =)
Hey Paulop, I didn't know you drew too! That's cool :) (I can't draw for my life so that makes you even special-er ;)) Also, good job on the eyes. ...
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: Lightning Fight
This is really good. Although I'm not religious I could feel great emotion in this and your imagery was really great. But, if it's a song (like you said it ...
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: Echo of a Smile
Well... These are all kind of odd. I like the first and second the best. 1. The first because I love the way you have yourself faded into the background ...
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: Will You Fly With Me?
Wow, these are really great! I love the second dragon from the third set but because it's so sharp it doesn't seem to go with the others as well. But, ...
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: Ever Green and the Philippines
Wow, these are really great. The close-ups are really beautiful and when I looked at the last one it was like my eyes were really seeing the florescent light. One ...
Jun 1, 2011
