Justagirl

To see what lays inside . You will get a story , But can you pick out truth from lies ? L i ke a metaphor , I am a ...

NinjaDragon

What wouldn't?

Dark brown, medium length hair that's always in a ponytail. Big blueish-brown eyes, cute nose, thin lips, regular white skin.

Wow, I know almost all of those songs even if they're not the original song :D so 8/10 1. Money Honey - Lady Gaga 2. Grenade - Bruno Mars 3. ...

Let it's brightness (I added a break here) widen your smile. One more push (added a break here too) and sail to Greece , or to Rome , or to ...

But we ignore the fact that it's there. You should join this line into the 2 above it then add the break. N obody realizes what they'll do to feel ...

Wow, this is awesome. The only thing is that it's a little hard to see what the hand is holding besides the Unicorn horn and the rainbow wings... What is ...

Lol, really great work here - so far it's really funny XD The only thing I saw that was wrong was... You want to get rid of her because she's ...

I wish I could tell him how I feel , I wish he could know this is real . No hate , no lies - p ure love is what ...

This is a really great piece. Your drawing skills must be very high... Nice job on that ;) I will never be able to draw this well. XD I like ...

Great job. There's only a couple of problems... 1. You have a couple of punctuation errors, try and revise it to find them and it should help ;) 2. You ...

Great job with this! Since everyone else has pointed out the grammatical and capitalization errors I'll just say everything else. ;) Your flow is great and so is your emotion. ...

Ok, so, like Ignatius says you need to break it up. Luckily, I'm willing to do that for you! Here, this is my, broken up, version. (Then I'll get on ...

Ok, I've read this over twice and then I tried to figure it out and my fizzled out. I think I'd better not try to solve it again or I ...