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Hey, I had to make another poem for Language Arts and this time it was a haiku (grrr :evil: haikus don't like me)! So, wanna review it for me, please? ...

Granted but they mutiny against you and kill you. I wish I could get to my meeting on time.

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10/10 LOVE Jack Russel Terriers! -Alzora

7/10 Cute! -Alzora

Unfortunately, there were more evil ninja cookies at the chocolate shop.

9/10 pretty! -Alzora

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Adam Lambert is O.K. LOVE the Lady Gaga and Jay Sean song though :D 9/10 1. Sowing the Seeds of Love - Tears for Fears 2. Dear God - XTC ...

Wow! These are amazing! So, you drew these all on a Tablet? Wowzers, that's incredible! The only problems I see are... 1. The first one's hair is a little odd. ...

I shouldn’t have gone along with this , You forgot to italicize the "I" at the beginning of the sentence... Most think we’re just friends, or colleagues, but occasionally we ...

Never say " I Love You " If you really do not care. Great start :D Never talk about having feelings, If they aren't truly there! This line is a ...

Wow, great poem. The emotion is great in this but the flow seems a little weird. It's probably because of the couple of sentences that are a few words longer ...

Like many of your other poems this needs some more punctuation. Other than that it was pretty good. The only thing I would change is the amount of periods you ...

I received a decent educated (?) and focused on my studies. Check out this sentence? It's a little weird... Other than the part I pointed out above this is a ...