JustMoonshine

Hi! This is the prelude of a novel I'm writing. Please comment! If reviews are positive, chapter one will be up soon! Thanks xx Prelude When the Stars Align Dr. ...

Yeah, spacing would be nice. My eyes started hurting halfway through, but then again, my eyesight is really bad :P Anyway, I thought it was really good! And if you ...

Hi! Heehee.. it's my first post! :D Anyways, it's a really great first chapter! I especially liked the bit at the beginning before the chapter began. I think Aet Lindling ...