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Re: Ugly
Wow. This is really ... just, wow. This is so sad. The saddest part for me was " She sleeps in the ground but of course her true beauty was ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: Ice Cold Fire: Chapter Three Pt 2
Hello! It's interesting and I think this story could really turn into something. Here are a couple things I noticed: - It confused me a little in the beginning. I ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: Dance
Very captivating poem. It actually gave me the urge to start dancing. I like how it's deep and relateable but easy to understand. It's wonderful. Great job! ~Me
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Photography
Wow. They are wonderful! ~Me
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Puppet Master
The title totally drew me to this poem. What a great poem it is too! Each verse kept drawing me back in. I totally agree with Ash. As she put ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Crossfire
Hello, veritas! :D I like it. It's... well, nothing like I've read before. They pierce through my flesh and leave my heart bleeding. ^ Love, love, LOVE this line! It's ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Need Reviews?
Abhishek's review is done. :)
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: God's Gift
Wow. I agree with KaylaCoon. You did a superb job and it was a great read. Before leaving, I took out that photo and gave one long, final look at ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Moonlight
You are such an amazing writer. "Moonlight" is a beautiful poem. I don't even know how to explain how much I love it. I'm speechless. You have created a WONDERFUL ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Alterations
Wow. I like! It's short, but I could absolutely relate. Just... wow. I've re-read it a few times already and I can't get enought of how great it is. The ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Need Reviews?
Hello! I'm looking to review some works and figured why not make a topic on "Will Review For Food"? So, here I am. First off, I would like to say ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: The Ballerina
Wonderful. It made me really want to see a ballerina dance in person. The imagery was, I thought, amazing. "The Ballerina" was really wonderful. Sorry if this isn't a very ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: The Princess and the Stones Prologue
When I first read the title, I instantly clicked the link to your story and I'm glad I did. :) It's great! It's totally a story I would see in ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Lead.
Hello there! First off, this is a very interesting poem. I haven't really read any thing like this before. So, good job with that. (: I’ve had this thought In ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: Between Shades of Gray
I totally agree! I just read Between Shades of Gray and I thought it was amazing. It's such a great book. ~JustMe
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