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I like the chorus "That is why I stand in the rain So no one can see me crying." It's nice imagery. There are a few things I'm not so ...

Thanks. I've made the suggested edits. I now realise how the punctuation is needed, have I got it right?

Sorry about not reviewing others work first; I'm making a start on that now.. I've edited it to try and rework the rhythm/rhyme, but now there are some lines that ...