JustDance

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This is a story about teengaers that hardly know each other. They are "newbies" at their school, and so have been sent on a camping trip, to get to know ...

I'm all alone rightt now ): Lol (:

Light_Devil I seriosuly hope you're not like that in real life...lol...xD ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Anette ------------ Right after I snapped a

u gonna post light_devil???

ugghhh drama :roll:

Tcspyder. Her's does NOT suck, it needs improment but I liked it.

That's when I snapped. "I am NOT your friends, so just stay away from me!" I yelled, tears now forming in my eyes.

re read your story..i added tips. =]

Chapter 1 The Opera The lights dimmed in the Palace Garner Opera house, all the talking from the gentlemen and high class ladies,[b]no need for a comma. hushed.(How they were ...

It's nice. You need a rhytm though. It has to rhyme. I liked it though, cause it showed your feelings. How about some imagery though? Like his smile brighter than ...

When I got back everyone was seated in a circle. I sat down next to Lily. "So what are we talking bout?" I asked, trying not to make eye contact ...

I stared at Ballow. I quickly got up and ran away into the woods. "Ugh! Why couldn't I face him?" I thought outloud. I was scared, just plain scared. He ...

I can help you pretty good since I write songs myself. Well first of all the basic thing about writing a song, is making sure you have some kind of ...