JustDance

beer-belly.

Legal. Simply because making it illegal hasn't done much to restrict it's control. I know a lot of kids who do it just to rebel, it's appealing because you're not ...

AM I MISS YOU COME BACK IN MY LIFE. Hey Riley, call me JD! Haha, yeah I've been on and off this site for awhile now, but hopefully that'll change. ...

Haha, hi Alfred nice to meet you too! Call me JD. I haven't been inspired to write much lately, but when I do I'll let you know. In the mean ...

Hey there! I actually liked this, I found it both amusing and strange. I agree that the foul language seems to just be shoved in there, but in a way ...

Hi there Sakshi! This is going to be a quick review, just placing emphasis on some factors you need to work on. First off, make sure you use proper punctuation ...

Does it sound bad to say I basically flirt when I'm talking to any guy, as long as they're even a bit good-looking? It's flirting, and as long as you're ...

Hi! I know I've said I'd be back and active for sure, but I'm obviously not good at keep promises. I'm really going to try hard this time though to ...

Before you read this piece, I'd been like to say it's been 14 years since my parents separated. I'm not looking for sympathy, or a pat on the back. It's ...

Pursuit of Happyness ( still not able to figure out why it's spelled that way. ) A Walk to Remember The Notebook Don't judge, I am a girl, after all.

I was just looking up "writing sites for teens" on Google, or something like that, and bam YWS popped up.

This is just, oh my God, so beautiful. Brought tears to my eyes. You are an incredible writer.

This could use improvement. The cliche dialogue left me feeling unsatisfied with this piece. Moreover, I understand how you're trying to base your story around the song ( I love ...

This was really fast-paced, which I both liked and disliked. I wish to have gotten to know the main character a bit more. Questions like - where is her mother? ...

Everything you said, you spoke from my mouth. Love it.