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Re: Iris and the Minotaur - Chapter 2/8 [Ink-stained Maiden]
Hi, thanks for the help. I'm trying to generalise your advice on commas, it seems I ought to use them and full stops more frequently. I'll try my best to ...
Oct 24, 2024 -
Re: Iris and the Minotaur - Chapter 2/8 [Ink-stained Maiden]
Hi, apologies for the late reply. It's not AI generated, but I understand where your confusion comes from. I guess I just needed an external perspective to point out where ...
Oct 24, 2024 -
Re: 1: The New Way Home
I really liked this. You made the protag really relatable really fast. The lines about the earphones and the overthinking to rationalise a longer route were very strong examples of ...
Oct 24, 2024