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JustARedDesign

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: 1: The New Way Home

    I really liked this. You made the protag really relatable really fast. The lines about the earphones and the overthinking to rationalise a longer route were very strong examples of ...

    Oct 23, 2024
  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: Moldering Memories

    Greetings. First of all - very cool story. I've actually been looking for a story like this for bit now, and this successfully sated that craving. Before I get into ...

    Sep 20, 2024
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: I'm Cold

    Greetings, this is my first review so forgive me if I do it wrong. This is an interesting concept, the ideas at play have a lot of potential. You've picked ...

    Sep 13, 2024


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