JustACanvas

Personally, I thought this had a certain charm to it. I like the fact that you see it progress, and yes it is poetic, but some great stories how a ...

I thought this was really good, I can relate to Lily's point of a cliche coming but not from twilight but Noughts and Crosses : best friends, kiss, fall in ...

I love the beginning, where "Fay" has so many thoughts in her head as she wakes up. You can almost feel a tempo to it! It is very funny and ...

What I like about this is the use of ''Him'' in the opening sentence. No name, but something more personal. The issue I have with it is this : So ...

Pretty much everyone has picked up on the points to review, but I couldn't not comment; I found your synopsis and title intriguing. The title to start with is one ...

Kings of Leon - inspires great emotions to put into writing. If you haven't heard any before I would recommend it. Some of their songs grow on you, but the ...

I just had to comment on your piece. It's very captivating, to the point that when i finished reading it I felt almost angry that there was no more. However, ...

I found the society when browsing for places for young writers to share and develop writing, it appealed to me as I found many pieces of writing immersive to read ...

I'm new here and I hope you don't mind me commenting. :D I feel John Steinbeck isn't the most poignant writer out there, his writing is used widely for all ...