Juniper

Hey there Zinnia! Juniper here! =] Tears fall quick, As melted wax, That hardens On the floor. So, while this is an interesting start to the poem and all, I ...

Hey Gahks! Juniper here! =] You've got quite a review from Galeri as well as Hannah; I'll just stick with my overall thoughts. I truly like the mood of this; ...

Hey Adam! Juniper here! :twisted: I told you I'd review this. And, just a little note; you misspelled poem in your subtitle. Peom should really be poem. *is nitpicky* Speaking ...

Hey Kris! June here! Okay, at first glance, this poem looks strangely innocent and sweet, but as we come to the end, it's almost... evil. At the end here, you ...

Hey there Rodhead! June here! :) Mars has covered some of the important stuff that I would have touched on, so here's my two cents: At dusk there will be ...

Hey there Flem! June here =] This poem is brilliant. Very strong with emotion and excellently written. I won't even touch on nitpicks at all. I agree with Juicebox; starting ...

Hey there, welcome to YWS! I'm June, your reviewer for the moment. ;) Before I begin, I just want to let you know that YWS has a 2:1 ratio policy, ...

Hey Marz! June here! (You've attacked the poetry forums lately, I see :P) One of the hardest things about people requesting reviews is reviewing the piece and not finding anything ...

Hey there Zakku! June here! (I haven't reviewed anything of yours in ages, no joke) The Ninth Period Bell has just rung I do not feel the urge to run ...

Hi Rodhead! June here! (This, and Mars's comment make me want icecream!) So, this is a cute piece. You're lucky you were writing poetry at eleven years. :P It made ...

Hey there, Juniper here! So, Megan, as you say, this is an important subject to write about. It naturally raises awareness on a certain subject, which is wonderful, because people ...

Hi Ofir's-brother! I'm June! This is wonderful. :) Haiku is a tough type of poetry to nail, and I think you've done it quite well here. For the sake of ...

Hi Kyllorac! Juniper here! This was suprisingly enjoyable and sweet to read. I have to agree with Mars on this, I love how the narrator is in denial/refusing to accept ...

Hi Liz! June here! Eek, so many pretty flowers! I would say to just keep an eye on your exposure as you take the photos, because if you notice here, ...

Hey there, JessaRose! Welcome to YWS! Before I begin this review, I just want to mention that YWS has a 2:1 ratio policy, which means that for every story/piece you ...