Juniper

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*edits review* That review made me make sure to preview all of my reviews before submitting and read them before leaving the thread. Psh, ridiculous June... So, right, I was ...

Hey there! June here! Ryan has pointed out a lot of good stuff here, so I can pretty much do a lazy overall. :P • Things I don't like so ...

Adrian lives! You know, I was just looking back on one of my old, super-repetitive poems and you were one of the two people who reviewed it. I was wondering ...

Hey Flower Child! June here! Time just tickin away to my everlasting pain. - tickin should be ticking here, dear. I understand that sometimes the G is eliminated for effect; ...

Hi helpful! June here! I really, really like this poem. Poems that pertain to nature/animals are my favorite. The only things that I would point out is the close repetition ...

Hey aszx, Is this nonfiction or is it Action/adventure fiction? I'm feeling as if it belongs in non fiction because it seems more like a personal experience, but I'm pretty ...

Hi there, June here! I think this is pretty nicely written. I really like the bottom line of this, but the images of blood, frustration and angst that are used ...

*spams* Jon has freaky eyes.

Hey Elijah! June here! I'm glad you decided to post this, but sorry I took so long getting to it. There isn't much here to critique, I found it excellently ...

Hi Ayumi! June here! I try not to be judgmental before reading a piece, but I wasn't expecting much from this. To read this, and get more than what I ...

Hey Kylan! June here! Oh, Kylan, why are all of your stories morbid but so addictive? XD I don't have much to say on this; I cannot ever critique your ...

Linkitty-Caterpillar! Juniper here! =] So! It's been a good century since you last posted, right, right? Let's have a stab! I sighed and remembered why I was here in the ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS, I'm June your reviewer for the moment. Before I begin, I want to say that YWS has a 2:1 ratio policy, which means that for ...