Juniper

Hi hi! June here! I really like your writing-- I just don't read it enough. :) Here's an attempt to review/critique this. So, for starters, I think you have a ...

Emma! June here! Wow, this was superb! As I was reading it, I was not expecting the end to be anything like this at all. It's a great ending-- you're ...

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Hey RGallagher! June here! Wow, this piece definitely hooked me from the beginning... You have a wonderful way with words. Some things I want to point out: Jeremy said nothing. ...

Hi Kyllorac! Juniper here! Synonyms for golden? Hmm... I would suggest dandelion, but that seems too flowery and not suited to this story. I hate sending people to thesaurus's when ...

Hi Rosey, Tricky question, indeed. I'm thinking of sketching up an article on this, because if I explained everything to you that I have in mind, I would definitely confuse ...

Hey there, welcome to YWS! I'm June, it's great to see you here. Before I begin, I just want to let you know that YWS has a 2:1 ratio policy ...

Aunty-Poppity! June here! So, I think this is definitely a brilliant piece. Creative and short. Little things first! I am blind to your flaws – at least, I would, had ...

Hai Megan! Juniper here! You write a lot of poetry, don't you? You're fairly good at it. I think that one of the main things about the poem that stands ...

JonboY³! Juniper here. So, right, I've seen this song before and I believe I gave you my thoughts on it before? Yes/No? Not sure. Either way, I'm going to jump ...

Hi Anshita! June here! I can't really speak much on this song -- I'm not very good at reviewing lyrics because I can disagree with something that the lyricist wants ...

Hi EmoBear, I just want to let you know that YWS has a 2:1 ratio policy, meaning that before you submit one piece of yours, you should review two things ...

Hey there Princess! Juniper here! This was beautiful! I especially loved the imagery you've used here; it created a peaceful, peaceful atmosphere that suited the poem exceedingly well. • Little ...

Hey there! June here! This is such a wee piece, I'm afraid to touch it. Nevertheless, I'll dig in. :P 'I would like to meet you today,’ Joe told me ...

Le Kat! Juniper here! =D I don't ever review you enough. *lays scissors, red pen, and harshness on the table* “Sometimes that mountain you’ve been climbin’ is just a grain ...