Juniper

Hey there! Juniper here! So, I think this poem is a cute, creative start, but it's honestly easy to see that you are pushing the poem for rhyme and rhyme ...

Hey! June here! I rarely review lyrics due to their tricky nature, but I noted that this doesn't have any reviews, so I'll have a stab. Anyway! I would really ...

Hey Kat! June here! Awwww! This is such a pretty, pretty poem. Poems relating to Nature are my favorite and win me over easily. So, let's see! I enjoyed the ...

Hey Mage! June here! So sorry, it always takes me long to get to reviews. One thing: YWS has a 2:1 ratio policy, meaning that you should write two reviews ...

Hi Alyss! June here! Welcome to YWS! How's it for you so far? I'm really bad at reviewing lyrics, but here I go! I was able to get a sense ...

Hey there! June here! So... I think that this is supposed to be a lesson sort of story, but we're not actually getting the full feel of it. Right now, ...

Hey there Ofir! June here! Aww, no replies on your previous post? :( In the future, if you want a review, feel free to PM me. I'm usually up to ...

Rosey! June here! Mwaha, something fun to review! *lays scissors, harshness, and red pen on the table. The red pen shows in black, though* She knew why leaving was the ...

Hi Poppity! June here! My first thoughts on this was "Huh? The character jumped off a building?" So, while I think that it's good, in all of it's vagueness and ...

Such a selfish bunny, tsk tsk. (Teague needs to stop thinking so deeply on such matters :P) Snoinkie, this story is hilarious. I started laughing when I first read it ...

Hi there! I'm June! Welcome to YWS! So, this poem was decent. I think that because the subject of a love poem is so commonly used, so commonly written about, ...

Hi Angel Wing, I'm June, welcome to YWS! This is a really cute poem. The rhyming was very well done, and the rhythm was even, swift and brilliant. I love ...

Mars! (Thanks for rating this xD) This was excellent! I read this story once... I don't remember the name of the girl in the story, but I think it was ...

Question! Would you prefer for me to edit/critique this in word and then just send the file back to you here? Or would you rather me do it through PM? ...

Hi there Fragile! You've done an excellent job capturing the excitement and pace of a motorcycle race. At first, I wasn't sure if the narrator was a girl or a ...