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Re: Just me and You
Hi there Flower! Juniper here! I've seen you reviewing all over the place, and you've got 107 reviews on the leaderboards this month (which is awesome!) so I figured I ...
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: My Love
Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I'm June (or Juniper) and I'm going to run over this for you quickly. One of the major things about poetry that can never be ...
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: Maybe the Sun Will Set Tomorrow
Aloha Shina! Juniper here! So, it's been a little while since I have reviewed anything of yours. I think this poem has lots of potential, but I don't feel like ...
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: Love...or Torcher?
Hey there! Welcome to YWS! YWS has a 2:1 ratio policy, which means that for every one piece of literature you submit, you should have completed two reviews prior to ...
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: As The Clock Strikes Twelve [3]
Auuushy! You have every right now to send me virtual monsters to attack me. I can't believe I haven't reviewed this yet! (Really, I'm just eager to get to chapter ...
Jun 21, 2009 -
Re: Josephsdotter
Hi Kylan! June here! So sorry for taking so long to get to this. :P I love this. It's so beautiful, and very peaceful-- compared to your other poems, I ...
Jun 21, 2009 -
Re: Absalom, my son
Hi Kylan! I love, love, love how this story begins in fragmented pieces of information (which consists of sentence fragments as well), but as we read on, everything becomes clearer, ...
Jun 21, 2009 -
Re: A Simple Mistake: Chapter Four
Hey Tiff, June here! So, as I told you the other day, I had a review for this done on my flash drive, but either my computer or flash drive ...
Jun 20, 2009 -
Re: Advanced Critiques Questions
Most people give a quick description, Karsten! Others don't, but if you see a story that might look interesting, feel free to ask the question in the respective threads. You ...
Jun 17, 2009 -
Re: Mayflower [2]
A/N: I'm having an extremely hard time with this chapter; I can't get it to flow evenly. Harsh criticism welcome! It's bit long. :P -- I hadn’t noted the appearance ...
Jun 17, 2009 -
Re: Esper’s Sepulchral I : Chapter 1: The Season of the Pikara
Don't drag up old posts unless you're asked to; it pushes the newer words back into the forum, and annoys the author if they've improved since posting. :P In the ...
Jun 16, 2009 -
Re: Flowah Powah
Thanks very much Gryphon and Texan for the reviews! Much appreciated. :) I see what you're saying about the rose on the piano; that's the only photo out of these ...
Jun 16, 2009 -
Re: As The Clock Strikes Twelve [2]
Aloha Aushy! Juniper here! I feel so bad! I really should have gotten to this sooner so that you could read the reviews before you left, but presumably it's too ...
Jun 16, 2009 -
Re: Flowah Powah
Flowers, anyone? I saw the red. -- BigBadBear, I Saw The Red. I planted the seed into the ground, /Beneath a lovely lil’ dirt mound./After many’a day/ The seed, in ...
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: In Finitum
Hi Galleri! Juniper here! Sadly, I do not have much to say about this poem, although it's so brilliantly done. Only little nitpick I have with this is: (they'll planta ...
Jun 15, 2009
