Juniper

Hey there, Aquamarine! June here, your reviewer for the moment. I have to agree with Krupp; it is indeed a rarity to find rhyme and rhythm executed well like this. ...

Hi there, Hailey, June here! As Jasmine said, formatting would help this poem out a bit, because it would give it more of a poetic structure. However, I don't feel ...

Hi, Hailey! I'm June! Welcome to YWS. Poetry is an awesome way to get your feelings out onto paper, or out to the world. I can see that you have ...

Hey there, Blue socks! Welcome to YWS! I'm June, your critic for the moment. Before I begin my review, I just want to say that YWS has a 2:1 ratio ...

Hey Knightly Angel! June here! Wow, this was great! This has to be the best poem I have read from you so far! I loved your rhyme scheme throughout this. ...

Hi there, Amaryllis! June here! I think this poem was rather cute, but I think that you sacrificed the potential to have a good, strong meaning behind this for rhyme. ...

Hey Ross! June here! I haven't seen you or your work around for quite a while! I feel pretty bad critiquing this, because it's a song, and songs are generally ...

Hi Kylan! June here! :) This is a wonderful idea. I'll definitely keep an eye on this thread to look out for updates. For this first poem, granny , I ...

Right, as they said, this is nearly the whole point of YWS! If you look in the welcome forum, you'll see a sticky titled The Buddy System ; there you ...

Hey Krupp! Been a long time since I've reviewed you last. To be honest, I think this had a wonderful flow to it. It's so short, but you managed to ...

Dreeeeeeamwalker, the purpleee! You get my 650th review, which grants me a shiny blue star. June here, as if that's not obvious. :P This is a fabulous masterpiece of art. ...

Hey there! June here! I second Cadmus-- the tips that these reviewers throughout there are helpful. Depending on what type of paper and what weight pencil you're using, it should ...

Hey there! This is really good. Any nitpicks I would pull on this have already been pointed out by Meep(:, but I would strongly back up adding a shadow for ...

Hey Jasmine! June here! :D I wish I could offer you some constructive criticism on this, but I can't. I found this extremely well written-- the structure and wording was ...

Hey there, Flyer! June here! I found this to be a pretty nice poem. The stanzas were short, with short verses-- nicely written. I just want to point this out: ...