Juniper

Fraaaagile! Your photography has gotten better! I love the first one. I would say that the details could be sharper, but blame that on the camera. They don't always like ...

Hi Dreamwalker! Great to see more of your work! :) Very nice line art here. I would love to see some shading going here as well. They are really skinny; ...

aquickbrownfoxjumpsoverthelazydog123456789 I wants. Even if it means YWS code needz to be rewrited. Must have. But, no, in all seriousness, the admins run a name change week every once in ...

Hi, Rasca lover! June here! I believe that this piece has some potential to it, but I don't that you've fulfilled it's purpose yet. When she was sixteen years old ...

Jared, you're ridiculous. xD

Hi KJ! When I am not so tired, I plan to review this, and the other three chapters you have posted. So far, reading over this, I can say that ...

Hi Conrad! This was an excellent finish to the story. It sealed all of the events in nicely, and made your audience pity Naldar for not knowing the full truth. ...

Hi Conrad! June here. :) Another excellently written chapter by you in the same even pacing and wonderful tone. The only thing I have to point out about this is ...

Hey Con! June here! I felt bad reading and enjoying this and not being able to do it. I'll try the best I can to review this. I don't have ...

Haha, I missed the D. Don't ask how, I rarely ever do that; it's supposed to be hardship. :P

Hey Poppity! June here! Nitpicks first! =D I leaned in closer. Suddenly, its head spun around and it let out a loud quack right in my face. Do Geese quack? ...

Hey there Shina! June here! :D So! I see somebody has gotten better at description. :P Let's have a stab: A torrent of crimson cascaded down his face with the ...

Hi Incog! I'm lazy :P. It's been a long time since I did this sort of review: Every single night, I would stand in that doorway, fingers ready to flick ...

Haha, you guys all have spiffy handwriting. :P Not that anyone doesn't know what my sloppy handwriting looks like. These are from NaPo, so I wasn't intending to write neat. ...

Hi, Black Rabbit! June here! I really, really like this poem. It's interesting and nicely written, but I do have some [harsh] nitpicks about the repetitive scheme that dances in ...