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Re: Nature's photos
True, true. But while it's fun it does take concentration. It sounds like a decent camera (9 MP is pretty good for higher resolutions =D). What make and model is ...
Jun 24, 2009 -
Re: Nature's photos
Well... I do admit that shredding is fun sometimes... But, psh. I wasn't being negative. It's constructive criticism. I was being honest. To be honest, it really looks like you ...
Jun 24, 2009 -
Re: Jace & Clary, 2 ghosts, and an Angel
Hi Lily! Your photo manipulation has gotten better! Jace and Clary is rather simple, but I think it's nice at any rate. Don't have many comments on that one. :P ...
Jun 24, 2009 -
Re: Nature's photos
Hey Jon! Good to see some photos from you. :P So, I'll try to hurry through these because I need to eat dinner. =P The first one is pretty bland. ...
Jun 24, 2009 -
Re: Wicked Wishes
@_@ Long poem! Hey Jon! June here! Haha, I love shredding your stuff... On a serious note, this poem isn't my favorite. :P Coming to see me again, are you? ...
Jun 24, 2009 -
Re: Running
Hi there, Ballet Dancer! I'm June, your critic for the moment. To be honest, this poem was not the most interesting read. It lacked structure; rather it was a long, ...
Jun 24, 2009 -
Re: Where is the tallgrass?
Hi Blink! June here! Have I ever reviewed you before? It seems like I haven't. So, reading over this poem, I can tell it needs improvement; yet, it was very ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: Contract Everlasting
Hi Jon! June here! Like I just mentioned to you, this poem is much better than your previous, although it's a bit wordy in some places. (I'm aware that I ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: I need opinions.
It depends! It really matters how the story is written. It has to be done well; if two characters sound exactly the same, it gets boring. :P It works out ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: Spirit Smoke
Hello Jon! June here! I haven't reviewed you in what seems like ages. :) Because a flame is more than heat, And wax is more than oil. Keeping alive is ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: Blood, water, and tears (version 3)
Hey Misfit! I second Kitty! This is an extremely well improvement from your first attempt. I'm so glad to see that you used the tips thrown out there; you've really ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: The Personification of Spring :-)
Hey there! You have a fabulous username. Jemima Puddle Duck was one of my favorite bedtime stories ever. ;) And she came home to dinner that evening: the personification of ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: Crucible
Hi there, Penelope! Welcome to YWS! I'm June, and I'm going to critique this for you. ;) As they lay her down In a bed of wildflowers And tickled her ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: really important copyright question!
I'm not entirely clear on your question, but I will say this: Most publishers will only void a story if it's published on a "locked" site, meaning that the user/poster ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: I Hate Snoink
*le gasp!* That's more than you've ever done in a wordwar! :O Also. This is ridiculously funny.
Jun 23, 2009
