-
Re: A Memory So Vivid
Monki, Monki, MonKI! Juniper here =D Yay! Another poem by you to shred into fine bits! Mwaha! Let's get chopping! The memories- Sometimes They're so vivid, I can't even tell ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: It's Breaking Me
Hi VUZFEK! June here =} So! This is quite an emotional poem. I assume it's based on a heartbreak? Memories flash through my head in a blur While hurt fills ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Revenge
Hi Paper and Pencil! Welcome to YWS! I'm June, and I am going to review this for you :). Pah, no reviews yet? :( No fair. As i walked to ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Revolve
Shinigamizm! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you :). Claeren is right! This poem has a rather dramatic flare to it, and I love it. Stories are ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: What Would You Say
Summer! Welcome to YWS! It's June here :). Wow, this is the type of poem that brings tears to my eyes. It's amazing! I really like it, it's so delicate, ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Li'l Demon
Hi again, Me Against the World! June here again! Yay! This reminds me of a short story of mine that's in progress. It's called "The Monster in Me," and it ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: deleated
Hi Erica! I'm June, nice to meet you! Wow, how very touching! I hope you got a good grade for this poem, dear, because it's amazing! Let's get this reviewed: ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: One big, not-so-happy family.
Hey Fragile! June here! Surprisingly, I don't remember ever reviewing you. Maybe it's just my bad memory, or maybe I never did it. Either way, let's get on with the ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Fly
Hi there, Me against the world! I'm June, and I'm going to run over this for you, dear :). This is cute! Instead of using formal language and saying, "I ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Untraceable
Hi there, Offering! I'm June-- nice to meet you. I don't think I've reviewed you before; I'm not sure if I have, but either way, here it goes. This is... ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Controversial
Hi Jon! Guess who? :P I've finally found some time to review, so! Let's have a stab at this :twisted: Controversial is for the brave, The one who changes -- ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Neverwere. Chapter 1
Hey there, Eraqio! June here again :). So! Reading over this, I noticed a few errors, so, I'll point those out in bold. And, since your paragraphs are rather lengthy, ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Hola. I'm new. :)
*squee!* A new member! Yays! Hi Ryan! I'm June! Welcome to YWS! Quite an intro! Yay! You sound extremely interesting! Common names are cool. Unique, weird, exotic names aren't exactly ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: I walk alone yet find myself with company.
Hi Eraqio! It's June here :). Now let's begin, I promise not to shred this, but I might be a little overboard with the mechanics here. Let's see: One day ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Hewow.
Hi Sirius! I'm going to call you that, okay? :) I'm June! Welcome to YWS! Anyway! So, YWS is really awesome, if you can't tell that already. It was founded ...
Mar 4, 2009
