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Juniper

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Memory So Vivid

    Monki, Monki, MonKI! Juniper here =D Yay! Another poem by you to shred into fine bits! Mwaha! Let's get chopping! The memories- Sometimes They're so vivid, I can't even tell ...

    Mar 4, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: It's Breaking Me

    Hi VUZFEK! June here =} So! This is quite an emotional poem. I assume it's based on a heartbreak? Memories flash through my head in a blur While hurt fills ...

    Mar 4, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Revenge

    Hi Paper and Pencil! Welcome to YWS! I'm June, and I am going to review this for you :). Pah, no reviews yet? :( No fair. As i walked to ...

    Mar 4, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Revolve

    Shinigamizm! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you :). Claeren is right! This poem has a rather dramatic flare to it, and I love it. Stories are ...

    Mar 4, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: What Would You Say

    Summer! Welcome to YWS! It's June here :). Wow, this is the type of poem that brings tears to my eyes. It's amazing! I really like it, it's so delicate, ...

    Mar 4, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Li'l Demon

    Hi again, Me Against the World! June here again! Yay! This reminds me of a short story of mine that's in progress. It's called "The Monster in Me," and it ...

    Mar 4, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: deleated

    Hi Erica! I'm June, nice to meet you! Wow, how very touching! I hope you got a good grade for this poem, dear, because it's amazing! Let's get this reviewed: ...

    Mar 4, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: One big, not-so-happy family.

    Hey Fragile! June here! Surprisingly, I don't remember ever reviewing you. Maybe it's just my bad memory, or maybe I never did it. Either way, let's get on with the ...

    Mar 4, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Fly

    Hi there, Me against the world! I'm June, and I'm going to run over this for you, dear :). This is cute! Instead of using formal language and saying, "I ...

    Mar 4, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Untraceable

    Hi there, Offering! I'm June-- nice to meet you. I don't think I've reviewed you before; I'm not sure if I have, but either way, here it goes. This is... ...

    Mar 4, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Controversial

    Hi Jon! Guess who? :P I've finally found some time to review, so! Let's have a stab at this :twisted: Controversial is for the brave, The one who changes -- ...

    Mar 4, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Neverwere. Chapter 1

    Hey there, Eraqio! June here again :). So! Reading over this, I noticed a few errors, so, I'll point those out in bold. And, since your paragraphs are rather lengthy, ...

    Mar 4, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hola. I'm new. :)

    *squee!* A new member! Yays! Hi Ryan! I'm June! Welcome to YWS! Quite an intro! Yay! You sound extremely interesting! Common names are cool. Unique, weird, exotic names aren't exactly ...

    Mar 4, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: I walk alone yet find myself with company.

    Hi Eraqio! It's June here :). Now let's begin, I promise not to shred this, but I might be a little overboard with the mechanics here. Let's see: One day ...

    Mar 4, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hewow.

    Hi Sirius! I'm going to call you that, okay? :) I'm June! Welcome to YWS! Anyway! So, YWS is really awesome, if you can't tell that already. It was founded ...

    Mar 4, 2009


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