Juniper

Hi there Monument! It's June :) Yay! Another great poem by you that's left me speechless. Your play on words is absolutely amazing, Monument. There isn't anything I would change ...

Hi there Dallas! Nice to meet you! I'm June, and I'm going to run over this for you, dear. Let's take it bit by little bit. Sitting here at my ...

Your majesty, June here. Okie dokie! So. If I had found this poem without your username attached, I believe that I would be able to tell who wrote it. You ...

Hi Rawry! June here again =D I like this poem a lot more than your other one, dear! It's fresh and new, and original, and fun to read, and-- anyway! ...

Hey there Rory! June here! I like the concept you're using here. It's somewhat fresh, but I feel like it's presented a little flatly. It's not feeling poetic to me, ...

Shiiiiiiina! June here to [s]murder[/s] review your work! Yay! 50 second poems for the win! One day, I'm going to challenge you to write 5 poems in 5 minutes. Hey, ...

Hi there, Knightly Angel! June here! Wow, you were twelve when you wrote this? Tell your twelve-year-old self that she was a pretty downright good poet! This is impressive! I ...

How very creative! Hi there, I'm June, and I'm going to run over this for you, dear. I liked this a lot. The whole idea of giving us something to ...

Hi there! I'm June, and I am going to review this for you :). First off, poems about nature always win me over, even if they're not written well. *squee!* ...

Hi again, JustMe! June here! Wow! This was downright impressive! I really enjoyed this from start to finish-- you captured my interest at the beginning and sustained it throughout the ...

Hi JustMe! June here! Let's take a look at this! Okie dokie! Refrain from beginning lines, especially opening lines, with a conjuction such as "and". It's not liked, and it ...

Hi there, Telle! I'm June! I like this alot-- if it's based on your life, and I see that it is, I appreciate it more. Poetry like this holds honesty ...

Hiya Writing! June here =). So. I agree with both Niteowl and Krupp. The rhyming isn't actually working here. Instead of adding to this, it's restricting you. You have some ...

Hi there Krupp! June here! When I first clicked on this, I wasn't quite sure what to expect, and I dare say that my expectations were quite low. I'm impressed. ...

Hi there muffinman! I'm June! Welcome to YWS =) I really enjoyed this! I do not have much constructive criticism on this at all, it was quite well done. For ...