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Re: The Reigning of Spring: June's NaPo Thread
This is my first year attempting NaPo, and I have absolutely no idea if I'll make it through April with 30 poems =D. Disclaimer: I do not take responsibility for ...
Apr 2, 2009 -
Re: The Search for Snoink
"Right. So, just to avoid any confusion and trouble, who's going where? Do we three (she motioned at Cat and Evi as she said this) go one way and you ...
Apr 1, 2009 -
Re: Reviews vs. Posting
The 2:1 ratio is extremely difficult for me. I always forget to review before I post. :P Just kidding. Unless I'm greeting newcomers, I rarely think of it as a ...
Mar 31, 2009 -
Re: Standing Long Jump Animation
Hey Dynamo! This is actually really cool! The simplicity of this is perfect, and you've done a great job here. This must have taken a while to perfect :P. It's ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: NaPoWriMo 2009
I'm totally in :P, although I don't think I'll produce anything readable. xD
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: Child
Aloha, Sploosh! June here :). So sorry for the delay on this; I kept forgetting to review this, yet, I knew I was supposed to review some thing or another ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: Changes
Hi Evie! Welcome to Young Writers Society! I'm June, and I am going to review this for you now. Before I begin, I'd like to let you know that YWS ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: Some More Photies!
Wowers, Becki! This might be my favorite set by you! Or maybe not... Or Maybe... Not sure, but these are incredible! 1 - I love, love, love this one. It's ...
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: Untitled(for now)
Hey there, Layla! Welcome to YWS! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you! Let's put corrections first, and other stuff later: “Coming”, her Mom groaned back. • ...
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: Rider
Hi Kyllorac! I'm June! Whoa, you're good! This is amazing! The right side of his cloak looks a little furry. :P I know you're probably trying to show that it's ...
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: Hearts and Jellybeans
Hi there, Fragile! Juniper here! Ooh, nice! Cool photo! Let's see! Composition: When I take photographs, I usually look at the scene/subject lots of different ways before I even turn ...
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: Pawnshop Delights.
Hi Eraqio! This was rather interesting to read. I like your usage of onomatopoeia throughout this, dear. The repetition of some of the words created a nice, rhythmic effect, as ...
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: what do you mean?
Hello there, Playboy! I'm June, and I'm going to be your instructor/reviewer/critic for the moment. Let's begin, but before I do, I want you to know that I am not ...
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: No Match
Hi Peanut! June here! :D Wow! You know, I recommend you do NaPoWriMo this year; if you don't know what it is, it's National Poetry Writing Month; where you write ...
Mar 28, 2009 -
Re: Ellipsis
Hi there, Kisba! June here, and I'm going to review this for you. I'm not sure if I have ever reviewed you before, but either way, I'll try to not ...
Mar 28, 2009
