Juniper

Zinnia! *glomples* June here! I don't think this poem needs much on the improvement front, but I'll see what I can do to help you out. ;) Bluebirds fly through ...

Hey there Zaedi! Welcome to YWS! I'm June! YWS has a 2:1 policy rule that requests that you complete two reviews prior to posting one piece of each work you ...

Aunty Poppity! June here! Okay, when I clicked this piece, I honestly truly was not expecting much of it. I'm pretty much surprised; this is wonderful and amusing, dear. Now, ...

Hey there Hormello, welcome to YWS! I'm June, and I'm going to review this for you, adding in my comments and suggestions. However, before I do, I want to point ...

4-24-09 mockery This is one of those poems (I forget the name) that can be read either top down, or bottom up . it waits, patiently, in the mistakes we ...

4-23-09 breaking of a caught dream The teepees were raided today; a constant commotion of screaming and the burning smell of buffalo hide heavy in the air, holding the bodies ...

4-22-09 Monday nights lonely, sleepless nights, filled in desperation with chick-flicks and candy, straining every bit of life from the listless corners of the empty house, solitary laughter rising an

4-21-09 Memories Summer days of wading in the steep rock pools that grew along the edges of the water are now long behind us, shut and sealed, into a box ...

4-20-09 Dad, The moon is in it's halfway place, behind the black silhouetted branches of the pine tree. I know exactly what the clock will say, and even if I ...

4-19-09 surely, we've been here on the borders of indecision; tainted with the bloody ties of kins, and the beliefs of religions and humanist rites. surely, I've seen it all, ...

4-18-09 One of my friends gave me a scenario and asked me to write a poem relative to it. The family picture lies in the hallway, a mess of shattered ...

4-17-09 Three Haiku 1. wind blows heavy shaking leaves from branches spiraling to dirt 2. cherry blossoms bloom white, tinged with pink, sweet scented falling from the tree 3. moon, ...

4-16-09 Dedicated to my little sister On my tongue, four years is so much heavier than the weight it presses in my memory, it seemed like yesterday, standing in rows ...

Mod: Moved by request to Romantic Fiction.

Lin gets my 500th review! *throws confetti* So, hey there, June here. I'm kind of not sure what to write here, hehe, which is sort of ridiculous. But, yes, anyway, ...