Juniper

*Instructor walks in* Psh, greeters. I'll review this first, mwahaha! When it smells just like rain, on the stranger's perfect face, my heart brakes at that sight, my mind's silence ...

Yessss! That's awesome! Okay, I'm so in for this. xD

Is it possible for us to purchase a copy of the mag afterwards? :D

Eric! Clo-roupe has done a wonderful review on this, so, just pay attention to the important stuff she said, and you've pretty much got this covered. :) I truly like ...

So, Eric! June here! I'm just going to come in and repeat what everyone else said, kay? It was written in a strangely unique way and was ultimately refreshing. Done. ...

Hi Jon! Juniper here! :) One of the first things that I noticed about this poem is how forced it seems. It's not flowing as smoothly as many of your ...

Elllyyy! Hi! Welcome to YWS! I'm springrain, or most commonly known as June or Juniper. Grain works as well, but you can call me Spring or Rain. But, I like ...

SplitPin! Hi! Welcome to YWS! =D I'm springrain, but you can call me June. Juniper works as well, or Grain is acceptable, although it's really spring and rain. =P Anyway! ...

Hey Eric! Juniper here again! :) So, this was pretty cool. :) Let's pick on stuff that needs to be corrected, and then we'll move on to my babbling. =P ...

Hey Eric! Juniper here (or by your terms adviser or whatever). A quick note: You need to organize your portfolio to make it easy for your "Adviser" to find your ...

Coon! June here! I love your fiction. It's always wonderfully clear, and always, always enjoyable to read. Since this is for a contest, I'm going to go nitpicky on you ...

Hey there, Vera, This could be an interesting idea for a storybook. Goodluck getting it running. I'd like to mention, however, that things like this for storybooks and such can ...

Hey Baile :) This is a very, very interesting piece. Very insightful. I must ask, though, was it intentional to have the flowers bloom in summer and the fruits in ...

Whoops. :P *wants one*

Wow, Tifa! These are really good. I like your style. It's very pretty, and I love how you are able to use so many colors. I would recommend adding some ...