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Re: Orilie Davis -- Chapter One
*Enters in harsh-review glory* Hey Jonbo+Y³, Juniper here! Let's jump right into all of the bad stuff about this. I love it outside at night. The air is crisper, the ...
May 24, 2009 -
Re: Review Gallery
Aaaaapril! Mayflower [1]
May 24, 2009 -
Re: Mayflower [1]
A/N: This is the first part of a short story I've been working on for the past week. I'll be posting the next parts over the next few days. Feedback ...
May 23, 2009 -
Re: Post a Pic of Your Pet!
His name is Lynx. xD
May 23, 2009 -
Re: King of Babylon, Chapter 3
Splooshie! Juniper here! :) So, let's see: something wrong?” I asked. I could feel the girl stir a little in discomfort. This is definitely a nitpick, but, when using an ...
May 22, 2009 -
Re: King of Babylon, Chapter 2
Hey Splooshie! June here! :D I'm loving this story thus far. Really. Let's see: He shot me a confused look for a moment , as if something was wrong. “You ...
May 22, 2009 -
Re: King of Babylon, Chapter 1
Hey again, Splooshie! June here! First off, I'm going to disagree with Velvet on saying that this is cliche. I think that this has potential to be cliche, but that's ...
May 22, 2009 -
Re: King of Babylon, Chapter 0
Hey Splooshie! June here! This is a great prologue and all, but I have to say, your first chapter was hooking enough to hold my interest. :P Anyway! I'm going ...
May 22, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
Hakuna, you are so pretty! You look exactly as I imagined you. xD
May 22, 2009 -
Re: Our Silent Helotry
A/N: This is a rough, forced attempt at a rhyming poem of more than 4 lines for wisemann's poetry contest. Eager to restrain us, it rises, an ugly recess, blocking ...
May 22, 2009 -
Re: I don't know :P (and springrain chose the title, so ha!)
Few things! :P This poem is on my bedroom wall. My mom loves this, for some odd reason. It actually got super hot here after you wrote this. xD Not ...
May 22, 2009 -
Re: Can't log into the chat?
But I don't have homework! *whines*
May 22, 2009 -
Re: June [2]
Hey there! Would you mind putting numbers in your titles? Such as June [1] for the first and June [2] for this, so that your readers can keep track? Thanks ...
May 21, 2009 -
Re: Tip for critiquers...
This sent me into giggle fits. xD
May 21, 2009 -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
Hey Bobo! Welcome back to YWS! No need to feel out of place. The newer members here (like myself) have heard nothing but good things about you and are quite ...
May 19, 2009
